about me

hi im Aidan and Im a year 7 and i go to ngatea primary school and my home class is room 7 my teachers are Mrs hull and Mrs Taaffe Mrs harris

My Writing




Our Hero John

What John does is.....
He helps my Poppie clean the drains and culverts all over the Coromandel Peninsula but he most likes to scrape the gum off the sidewalk.  He drives the truck for Poppie sometimes when Poppie needs help. John also helps Marnie around the house and section.


How he helps.....
He never gives up doing what he loves just because he had operations on his legs because his veins had clogged up.He helps my Poppie and anyone else who needs him to help. John helped Poppie get firewood for our fire and helped him to connect the water tanks for outside.  When ever we need help John is always ready to help us.


What he looks like.....
John is tall and strong his hair is as grey as a storm cloud he has scars on his legs they look like lightning bolts striking down after he had his major operations. He is always happy to have company and is always polite
and is care free.


Hobbies.....
He loves to go fishing in the boat when he  goes up to the land.He loves to go to the land at coromandel to sleep in his caravan. He thinks it is relaxing but he is always busy doing what needs to be done.


What he likes.....
He likes to have company, talking to others and playing jokes on me. He likes playing with me and my brother. He likes spending time with his wife Marnie and his granddaughter Molly.   



Summary.....  
Even though he has had tragedies in his life like losing his step daughter and grandson in an accident which means his 4 year old granddaughter has ended up living with him, he stays positive and strong and doesn't let things get him down. That is why I think he is a great inspiration for me.
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This is where the robot was invented. by an old man who lives in the forest he heard a bang woke up and the door was open he got up and  had a look to see what was there he saw nothing in the distances.


He went outside and got to his porch and grabbed a lantern  he lit it up and walked into the forest he was going to find out what it was he walked onward and sore something  that can't be my  creation can it  his creation is trying to help a fairy that was stuck under a log the fairy was free the other fairy was coming out of the creations head the.

Creation dropped like a bomb the old man saw him drop and said no.

I see the soldiers eyes dying down every day as I gaze upon his face.
I hear the soldiers heart get weaker and weaker as it struggles to pump the blood through his body.
I smell the gunpowder on the soldiers clothes as I leaned closer to him.
I feel the whiskers of his bushy beard rubbing on my hand as I wipe away his tears
I touch his rotten clothes as I reach over to give him the food.
I turn around and I see the soldier struggling to get up.
I see his legs shaking as they struggle to carry his weight.
I watch him stumble to the ground as he is too weak to stand.





Title:Mountain biking

When we had finished rafting we went to mountain biking we had to go up this road and it was very steep my legs got tired i got to the top we had to wait for everyone they took a while they finally got here.We had to go down a steep hill to get there the track was on the other side of a little bridge we did not go to the right  that was the end.So we took the other one that was the start we took off down the track around the corners avoiding pine cones i hit one and nearly fall off.


My back wheel skidded along the ground and then I took off agan it was a 5km track we were only just over half way then wow a big hill we didint need to use the pedals but we needed our hand on the brack.me ethan eric and cambell were at the front cambell tryed to over take me by going over a hill between  two trees his handel bars hit the tree and he fall off


Josh was directing suzanne we know her as mrs harris she is one of the ngatea primary school staff she teachers room 7,8,9 and other groups. She was being   told by my friend joshua barker he was like a guied tour mrs harris was following joshua barker i got dust in my eyes we had to go round this. Sharp bend then we were there why we watered me,eric,ethan were doing wheel stands when everyone got back we went back to the bike stands and then put sunscreen on and had a swim in the lake then we went back to camp and had a shower had dinner and pudding and played and then went to bed.



My Nana
My nannie let me come and live with her when I  was just a baby.
My Nana works at the FVC Vets In Ngatea and she helps
serve at the counter. On the 31st of May my Nana and the rest of the stuff
have to Stocktake which means they have to count everything . When she  is in her office she is busy doing the accounts and paying the bills. Nana also makes appointments for the vets to go out to the farms.She wears glasses so she can see stuff.
She also wears a guardian  angel around her neck. She goes to the hair
dressers and gets her hair dyed a red / brown color. She is a short medium build
with blue eyes.She likes to go out for dinner.She also likes going to Australia to visit my cousins. My nannie also likes animals and reading too.my nannie does’nt
like messy bedrooms or boy who don’t get up in time for school!









1 comment:

  1. Good writing aidan but maybe you could put more writing from the writing in pumas and put it in here?

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